All Comments on 'Prolonging the Inevitable Ch. 02'

by MsPrometheus

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LevanaHyllLevanaHyllabout 12 years ago
Exciting

I really enjoyed this. The pacing seems a bit rushed and it would be perfect if I could get a feel for the setting, but otherwise the plot is absolutely engaging. I loved how you described the main male character. Sounds very cute! Can't wait for next chapter.

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