All Comments on 'Prom Fantasy Ch. 03'

by HornyTeenBoy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
That was HOT!!!

All 3 chapters were hot as hell.

SonOfAGunSonOfAGunover 18 years ago
Eye of beholder

You couldve done ten times a better job if you had done the story first person instead of third person view, try it.

You cant observe and tell us what the characters feel, be the protagonist when you write, the result will be far more intense and realistic. Dont watch them, be them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
enjoyed the heat

2 naked straight guys in a pool

and next thing you know they are lapping cum

and popping cherrys

cutandhornycutandhornyabout 17 years ago
Great story

I liked the sexual heat generated by two horny young guys in a cool pool in the middle of the night! I could feel it all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Ending?

So, when is the reunion? I need closure! xD

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