All Comments on 'Promises'

really no sex in it at all.. so.. that was pretty lame.

carpet munching story. What is it with you lesbo's, can you not keep these tales to another index,ie: lesbian instead of incest. Join the plastic prick brigade and leave all others alone. oh and dont forget your battery charger

I loved this. Brilliantly written, subtle and enticing. It is so engaging to glide over the sex acts and make us know they happened but let us imagine them: and we have ample material to imagine from, because you give us lovely personalities. This is the sort of thing I'd like to write. Well done.

Marcia I'd delete the negitivity that these bozos are saying about your work. Its supposed to be EROTIC and literate not BLATANT (and pant pant take off my jeans I gotta give myself a handjob) I loved the softness and sisterhood references I loved this story.. Happyday

The story line was good but the basics weren't there; What did you both look like. How was your touch on her & how was her touch on you.did you feel or suck on each others nipples or clits. were you wearing night clothes.

did you kiss/french kiss; how did it effect you. you need more sexual/sensual details.

Head and shoulders above the average Literotica story. Good English, too.

Hey, anonymous in UK...they're SISTERS! That constitutes incest, you manky git.

Beautifully written and deliciously subtle in the sensuality of the writing. An evocative and lovely story. Thank you.