All Comments on 'Promises'

by Chase N Auburn

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Nightowl22Nightowl22almost 18 years ago
Good writing

An emotional ending. And quite sad.

I am assuming the lad had a life afterwards regardless.

apilgramapilgramalmost 18 years ago
There are times when we must say goodbye...

to the love of our life. This guy got that chance. Some of us never get it....for whatever reason. This was well written from the heart. Keep up the good work.

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
Life has many stops but eternity is reachable

This is what we all face at sometime in our life and it’s never fair or pain free. Some people cope some never recover, all remember.

If despair in life makes us stronger I’d rather be weak.

Very well written with feelings.

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