- Loving Wives
- Providence
- Page 4
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And what about Richards belief in the amazing power of Providence? Well sometimes it might be wise to preempt its direction with a helping hand.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 months agoWhat the fuck is a .375 magnum ? And what handgun will knock you down if not fired with both hands? You may shoot more accurately but if anything the increase in stability from both hands increases recoil. Very very sad on anything touching the firearms aspect, I’m surprised you didn’t have him ejecting the “clip” from it
Anonymous3 months ago3/5
Good first story. Congratulations. Solid plot. Haven't come across the same in LW which is good. However, it needs editing to make it more readable.
If the first few paragraphs of the story don't catch my attention, i tend to abandon the whole story and find something else.
I pushed through because you mentioned that this is your first story and it averaged a 4.19 stars before I read it, so it may be worth it in the end (i did like the conclusion :) )
I skimmed through most of page 1 and page 2 though.
onlythelonelylove3 months agoSorry
It made little sense. He shoots her and the boyfriend is alive and tells the police. Or he kills them both. The police have him there , at the time, having asked after them, and since he is a law abiding citizen they have the caliber bullet that will match his gun. Awesome circumstantial evidence
Motive, locality, weapon type… yeah, he is getting off all right… I don’t think so. A confession would help; but would this god fearing moral man actually lie to the police? Hmm… and an honest non-exploitative capitalist as well! It is pretty clear that his wife has no clue who he is; and he doesn’t have much of an idea of what makes himself tick either! Thank you for the read
