by Faithful_Shadow
Love a good fan fic, Part of me was thinking that the deeps were gunna cum-steal from the girls. Ghost-walking back just in time to save them xDD
We both know that deeps never walk back.
They wait for the healer to finish getting screwed, and then get their rez.
Enjoyed the writing, could use a little more detail on the characters.
Other than it, it was fine.
I agree about the lack of detail. I have several stories in the works and this was a short story involving on going characters from bigger story arcs. Haven't quite polished the others to an acceptable quality so I threw this one out as a testing ground to see what kind of reception I'd get. Aerynel and Shae'lyn will be back and given a lot more depth and description.
Agreed on the detail matter. Still, can't wait to read your longer stuff;).
Nice one! There can never be too much sexy stories in the WOW universe!
Feel free to read "The adventures of Lucy and Tharion" if you like. I would love to get some more feedback there, too. :)