All Comments on 'Pumpkin Pie Passion'

And this was also a very nice sweet read, good luck!

Luna, there is so much to love in this charming story. The tone/atmosphere was absolutely perfect. The descriptions were top notch. You gave a very unique ending that was quite a surprise. You have what I consider to be one of the best sex scenes I have ever read on Literotica here. I love the Halloween socks among so many things of that scene. Bravo!!

I really enjoyed this one. Good luck!

Enjoyed this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good Luck!

Arlene

I loved the ending the best! It just came together so well ;-)

How do you vote for stories? I want to vote but don't see the option - Do you have to be a member? I'd vote for this one!

Hi,

At the very end of the story, there are rating stars beneath the words. You click on the rating stars to vote for the story: 1-5. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks to EVERYONE for your comments and votes! I've been trying to respond to each signed-in poster, individually. I appreciate the feedback. :)

~Luna

i love this story good luck!

i loved this story hope you win i voted for you

This was a very well thought-out story and very well written. Kept me interested right to the very last paragraph with a great sex scene in the middle! Good luck in the contest, Luna. Babs

Really enjoyed that - started out reading when I was really a little too tired to read, woke up by the third paragraph and was glued right to the end! You craft a most excellent tale, thankyou!

Hey there, this was really nicely written - I like your attention to detail, drawing us into every scene with practiced ease. I also think you've done a great job in bringing the characters to life. Everything in this story speaks of sweetness, tenderness, enchantment.

Thanks for the read, and good luck in the contest!

Luna- What a lovely story! You have a true gift. What a pleasure it was to read, from beginning to end. I am already wanting to read more. And I want a piece of pumpkin pie in the worst way ;) Thank you for sharing!

I'm appreciative of the continued feedback and critiques! I'm so glad you are all enjoying my stories! :)

~Luna

You have a gift or should I say many gifts. You are a wonderful writer with the ability to make us want to continue to read and want more. Keep writing, keep dreaming and keep believing!

I love pumpkin pie ~ sweet story! XD

A romantic tale that captures the spirit of the season deliciously. Congrats!

i know this is for halloween but i think you should keep writing this story! i love it!

Thank you Luna. Reading this led to an exciting evening with my lovely lady…and she slept wonderfully.

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This story could use a continuation....to see Ewan and Autumn together....maybe see both Gavin and Viviane at next year's Samhain, to show them how they are together. :)

This story may have been written 10 years ago but it's still a great read. I liked the twists and turns at the end, and the happy ending. Not the normal love story but still worth reading. Thanks

A very moving story - well-written, vivid descriptions of characters and scenes. Bravo!! A five-star read ***** !!