by datedsoul
Yes, a very good read. Well done and I had to finish in one session. Looking for more in this series.
You write very well. I have enjoyed each chapter and look forward to the rest of them.
One minor comment about this: "'Nough said," I replied". I recognize you like to use words to enhance the story and it sets your writing above much of what we see here. So, while this contraction of "enough" is correct, using the common form "nuff" would have made the sentence more readily understandable even though it might have technically have been out of Craig's character. As it was, I had to re-read it once to grasp the meaning. This is a really minor point that does not detract from a lovely romance story.