by datedsoul
Where's the rest of the story? This hot, excellent story?
VisualPerv
8 months between chapter 06 & 07 .
14 months since then , and the Author remains silent .
one of the best.
salute .
xxxhugsxxx
Whoah, I didn't see that coming. I did notice the little things that weren't right (Billy was the bf of Moira who she seduced, right?) but you really camouflaged it well--FAR better than in most stories! This story has been up for years so you probably won't be adding to it, but I think Shelly is totally redeemable, eventually. It's nice to have grey characters, not just pure good and evil.
This has been a really enjoyable story, thanks for all the chapters.
Tell me you are not leaving this story this way. I really like this story until the very end. Please do not stop!
Hey man great and wonderful story ... but you can't just leave us hanging like this!