All Comments on 'Quarterback and Cheerleader'

wat bout a 2nd chapter or something like an epilogue

I have read here in a long while. Loved the story and the characters. I agree with maybe adding another chapter or two...or three...lol. Awesome story!! Thank you, you're a great writer.

You really know how to spin a tale. Keep up the great work. I'm really looking forward to your next story.

That was a bigger a story that you wrote for this site. I like the way you describe the sex between the two of them and how he was able to come to the understanding that he did love her. It would be nice to find out what they did after they left her house and what happened between the parents on him?

You continue to amaze me with your storytelling ability. It is simple to write pornography. It is difficult to write a romance story that compells the reader to continue. Thank you and please keep writing. i hate waiting so long for your submissions.

well written story that i thoroughly enjoyed. thank u for sharing and continue writing!

Kind of reminded me of some of my own experiences! Still living with that beautiful lady 46 years later! Yes, it really can last a lifetime. Hope we here some more about this couple. Great story!

need to hear the next story of their life together

i loved it but i just wish you used a bit more of a realistic dialogue it sumtimes sounds kinda corny......but other than that it was an amazing read!!!

loved the story and really loved the last line... Very well said... Both knew the feeling and that was what mattered :)

5* :)

What a great and well-written story. I really loved this one. Great Job!

There needs to be another chapter, just so we can see what the reaction of her parents is

I've truly enjoyed reading your stories on this site. Holiday contest entry drew me to your fire. Keep up the great job!

Joedreamer you write some of the sweetest stories here. I'm glad you didn't stop writing!

You made a beautiful love story even with a cliche subject. You really are a gifted writer. Thank you!

Nice story. I hope they washed the sheets after disrespecting her parents bed. I also hope they loved and lived a lifetime together. But show some respect.

Loved the story line and the descriptions. Their beautiful sexual expressions were great, and it was amazing to see them actually falling into the love that would be theirs. I hope Bobby's sexy chest developed a bit of sexy chest hair, as that is a great turn on, especially in a high school senior who is a champion football player.

Didn't expect such a sweet Story.

When you read "Quarterback and Cheerleader", I couldn't help but roll with my eyes.

Thinking what could possibly be romantic about that cliche.

I was proven wrong.

Very sweet Story.

Though wished there was an epilogue, the usual "stayed together, married, live a good life, etc".

BUT most importantly I wanna know the 4 Names of their Kids.

I love a happy ending! GOOD JOB 👍

Really, really good story.