by RallyWeasel
I would give you five stars for this story, but there are no stars set up.
You blew me over with "Mask." Clearly you have a gift and are looking to refine it. Good for you! You are a 5 star writer. Are you perfect not. But doing it with out a net...well done. I kind of like the idea I'd not voting. You are not into the whole keeping score thing. Unfortunately it leaves you out of the hall of fame (which you deserve) but you get real feedback which is cool. I love the plot the concept and the well developed characters.
Thank you.
Wonderfully quick ramp up to an unforseen twist, and then the suggestion of further titulation. Very well written and erotic as all get out.
So good. I love it when a descent into perversion turns out to be a love story and you executed that marvelously.