All Comments on 'Quickie Spanking'

BDSM? More like erotic couplings. Light spanking does not make a story BDSM. Try again.

User a Spellchcker and/or an editor!

Not a bad little story,but ruined by spelling errors.

Odd, I did run it through a spell check. Will have to double check. As far as an editor, thought it was far too short to bother but will keep it in mind.

As far as the wrong category, wasn't sure where to put it. I'll see if I can get it moved.

Thanks for reading it and leaving comments!

I did not find so many spelling errors to rate all of the spell check comments. The first error would not spellcheck show a you instead of your. This piece does need an editor, as will all of your writing until you get more experience. Please continue reading, look for writing styles, sentence construction, and word usage. You have promise and you are writing. Please continue.

Once again thanks.

I'm in the process of picking an editor so my next submission should be better. :-)