by Samuelx
Wow! You have a gigantic ego and your story wasn't very interesting or erotic. Not enough detail about the other participants, it was all about you. Apparently it was a lot of fun, not so much for your readers.
cheri8
You would have to try really hard to write something worse than this... even writing gibberish would be better than this.
While the content of your story promises to be quite erotic, your execution leaves a lot to be desired. Plus, your modesty is a huge turn-off.