All Comments on 'Rachel & Don'

Please continue the saga. Make it a never ending story, chapter after chapter. What an absolute turn-on. A guranteed orgasm for all. Thank you misskittyclitty.

Your number one fan. BillyB

So real for me. I could fel her hand on my cock as the story flowed. And then when she fucked me ....I mean him.......wow! And NO! I am your #1 fan!!

Loved it! Please continue! She should dump that jerk of a husband and she and her dad can live a life full of love!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

Wow...the story was so real that I felt like I was there viewing the entire beautiful relationship. Made me wish I was the actual father of her. But, it wouldn't have taken me days to finally lick her pussy.

Liked it but background story info could be dispersed throughout, instead of bunched (catalogued), and trimmed down; so we can get to the the good stuff sooner and be more permanently engaged, not distracted. I liked that they were hesitant; but though it's a long time for them to the goal, it shouldn't feel like that for us, although postponements can be good is we don't feel bogged down. If you trim or rearrange the slower getting started parts, you can add even more emotion, sex, etc. But, then again, my mother always called me hurry-hearted. I love the good stuff.

Incredibly real. Great detail. And ever so naughty! Keep it up! You're certainly keeping mine up...

MissKittyClitty....Wow! I feel like I've just had my own penis jacked and sucked by you. YOU are a terrific writer. I was hard in seconds as soon as I started to read your thoughts. It's nice to know I'm not alone.

Bob

I wish I was the daughter. I would have fucked daddy sooner and be sleeping with him every night. Oh hell, why wait for night time..lol. Fuck him all day too. Please keep writting more chapters for them. BTW: I am female..lol.

holy shit that story makes me want to fuck my own daughter.

Thank you misskittyclitty, A very beleivable wee tale here, and spent some time dwelling on the mental discourses of both characters... Developing them and their respective situations in a short space is the mark of skill and artistry, and he fact that you approached two taboo subjects with mental reservations, albeit concentrated upon the main theme, I enjoyed thoroughly here.... Am looking forward to reading more of your works and right after I pause to gain some semblance of self-control here <grinz>

HL

"courtesy costs you nothing yet gains you Everything" Lady M

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What a hot story! How about more!?

Please write another chapter in this story it was so HOT. I realy enjoyed it and made me wish I had a daughter as sexy as Rachel. I would not have taken so long to lick her out and seeing she was so hot to have had intercourse as well.

Your story certainly brought me on and I like Rachel had to satisfy myself.

Thanks it was great.

Mike

i to have a daughter who has a dip shit husband. and so she comes over to my house for talk etc. anyway sex came up and i was told that she does not fuck him for long periods of time. needless to say we got very close and now are fucking. yes i said fucking my daughter and we REALLY like to fuck. i would sugest toy guys try your daughters they can be just great. thanx

y'all gonna hafta be real' careful, now, 'cuz you ain't gonna want that dip shit bastard of a husband of yer daughter to snuck in while y'all was still, y'know, makin' luv' and shot you dog gone dead, right there, stretched out, buried deep inside, yer lovin' daugther, there, do you? <p>

carry right on, sir, you and that purty and lovin' daughter of yer's; but y'all be careful now, y'hear?

I just wish there had been more of it.

It was a great story.

Still exciting!

Mmmmmm....hot story! My pussy is dripping, imagining myself right there, watching them...damn I'm so turned on, I want to fuck them both! Can't wait to read more!!

Loved your story..........hope you write more soon!! Had several flashbacks!

You are truly amazing...

Especially knowing that the daughter is not 18 years old or somewhere around that age bracket lol,to me its more of a turn on when the daughter is in her 30's or more. Just sayin' AND btw.....5stars for this story! EXCELLENT

The story was very well written and very erotic. I was hard the whole time I read it. More please

Very Hot! The thought of an older daughter is highly erotic!

You have perfectly described my relationship with my dad. It lasted during my 30's, 40's, and 50's. We started out slowly, and gradually went all the way in every way. I would dress up for him in seductively, and he would lick me to the most intense orgasms. His cock deep within me was so comforting and fulfilling. I would lightly scratch his scrotum and make him tingle.

One of the hottest. It made me think of my wife and her dad.

When my dad was bedfast for awhile I had to hold his penis when he peed. It was amazing to feel the flow through his manhood. There were times when he would get hard, and I marveled at that. He was truly a man! I thought I was quite privileged to be able to see him that way. He had a full-grown man's length and girth which was, to me, very impressive! Most daughters don't get to do that. I began to be aroused when I touched him. I had to bathe him, as well. One day he was fully erect and I knew he needed comfort and satisfaction. He was embarrassed at first. I told him it was all right. I got some sex lube and put it on my hand and ran just one finger up and down the length of his cock from one side to the other, and would lightly slide my finger over his purple tip and down the other side. His cock would throb with his heartbeat. He reached under my skirt and began rubbing my legs, and then went higher and rubbed my pussy. He moaned and then I wrapped my lubricated hand around his cock and began a full stroke up and down and lightly slide my finger or thumb over his swollen head. He began to buck, and I leaned over him and pursed my lips and opened my mouth as he shot squirt after squirt of his manly juices into my mouth. He shot sperm everywhere! When he came down from that he sniffed his fingers and smelled my pussy smell. He told me that the next time, he wanted to feel my pussy around his penis. He told me my pussy smelled very hot and sweet. The next day we did it again, and this time I slid up over him and let his cock go inside my pussy. He filled me so full. I had never before had a man that big or deep inside me--not even my husband. After he recovered, we continued. He told me he loved to see and run his fingers through my dark brown hairs on my pussy. He loved sucking my pink nipples and licking my clit. I rode him and let his cock go deeply into me. The tip of his cock massaged my deepest parts, and soon we both began to cum. I was 32 at the time. He was 52. For 29 years we gave each other love and sexual satisfaction. The last time we made love he was 81 and still able to make me orgasm. I have no idea how many times he left his manly sperm in me. In all those years, I never neglected my husband and his sexual needs. I would go home from dad's house, and all my husband knew was that I was very wet and ready for him. I told him that I was thinking of him and it made me wet and hot for him, and he would ejaculate profusely into me, and was so happy that I wanted his cock inside me. Both men in my life were happy, and so was I.