All Comments on 'Raising Alex Ch. 01'

...Please keep the chapters coming :) That was a very engaging, very interesting story and I'm curious to see how the plot develops. Keep up the good work :)

I love your story. can't wait to read your next chapter.

Nice new idea, am definitely gonna be looking out for the updates which I hope will come soon! Keep up the good work!

for more of this story. It is such a breath of fresh air. Such a different angle and I LOVED it. Hope you continue very soon. Ciao~

really liked it. i think jamie and mitch will make a cute couple. and baby alex 2.

Not such a typical storyline, so points for originality. I'll be looking out for the next chapter, so don't be like me and release them weeks apart!

I really liked the first few chapters. I hope you continue this story looks like it will be a good one.

Wonderful story, I look forward to seeing how they manage to get along with each other. He's already talking about having a love like his parents.

This story is really good. Except it has one drawback. Jamie instantly noticed Mitch but not his crotch. She was focused on features like his chest, face, hair, things that make up his personality. Whereas Mitch could only think of her as a piece of meat, big disappointment. I think if Mitch wants to have a romance like his parents then he'd better focus on Jamie as a person and not a sex object. I would like to see this story take a turn showing a great deal of romance and less focus on physical features.

Glad I stumblled accross this on this first chapter.It was gripping. Looking forward to see what comes next !

Especially for a first effort.

Good start. You gave enough of background to the main characters to make me eager for the next chapter. It's always a sign of a good read when there is enough intrigue in a story to make you want answers and wonder where the tensions will lead to. The pace of story development worked for me. I would have liked a longer chapter but you provided a good springboard to open this story.

I can't believe this is your first time writing! This is really really good! The characters are captivating and the story is very interesting. Please continue to the end. I really can't wait to read what happens to Mitch and Jamie. Will Alex's mom come back? Will Jamie reconnect with her mother? So many delicious ways this could conclude!

More! More!!

This is a really great start :) I can't wait to find out what happens next! Mitch sounds like an Adonis! I can see the story isn't complete but I hope you get around to writing some more soon!! This story sounds very promising!

Oh, yes. I really like how this starts off.

That it's been a while since you have written this story, but I wanted to show you my appreciation for having such great story telling skills. Thank you and I hope that you're still writing somewhere out there. :D