by adamaxilla
Rani you said " who had recently come to America from India", however she has the perfect Yankee accent, and live the American way , as if she is a blood Yankee.
come now be real.
I just finished this story, and I see that it's part of a series. If the others are even half as erotic as this one is, I'm going to die. Rani is fantastic!
Very good story--terrific pacing, nice attention to detail without bogging down the reader in trivia, very strong narrative overall. Keep up the fabulous work, adamaxilla!
Excellent writing, a very hot story!
It has some parallels to a story called "Roshni" that I wrote back in 2000, and you've given me the confidence to share it here!
Thanks bro, and keep up the great work.
Andy
Now I have to read the other stories. This first one was quite good. Good work and Thank You. Ronnie W.
This is a very sensual and erotic story. I have often watched to see the very same thing and only rarely today am rewarded with such a beautiful sight. Keep up the good work and please continue with this great story. It cries out for a sequel.
The best ever. Those who lived in the 70's know all about what you have written. There is no better sight than a woman with abundant hair in her pits and Rani's furry pits is such a treasure that I cant wait for more. Please dont stop.
I don't know what it is about the rash of wonderfully written stories featuring natural women, but let me say that I approve and am loving it!
Let's see more Rani!
This story brings back fond memories of my younger days when I tried various sly things to try and get this similiarly endowed girl to raise her arms so that I could get a peek. Unfortunately I only got the occassional glimpse and never anything else from that particular young lady, but what I wouldn't have given for the opportunity to do what Adam got to do.
Wonderful first effort sir, and I hope that you have some more stories of Rani in you.