All Comments on 'Raven Walks Ch. 18'

You write very well. But I find that this story its not much to my taste. Too much sleeping around with different people. I'm more into monogamy and I haven't fallen in love with any of the characters. However, I think a lot of other people will enjoy this.

I'm bored of her jumping from one man to another, from one vampire to another. I don't know if there is even one character in this story that I like or even sympathize with, anymore. Where is the meaning? A story becomes hollow when you can't relate to the characters.