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knightofheartsknightofheartsabout 15 years ago
Excellent

Very good story so far. Like the touch with stevie you could have just taken the usual turn and made him a buffoon but you gave him a nice sendoff. Hope to see much more from you.

PennLadyPennLadyabout 15 years ago
Good for Stevie

Good to see him have some fun! Nice touch, looking forward to more.

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