All Comments on 'Re-Awakening'

But why the story about the young boy? Another question: What's the future of James & Becka? And how will the development with John go? Looking forward to follow ups.

I'll be watching for more.

This story has potential but seems to be wandering all over the place.

The writer shows some talent and a lot of imagination but the misuse of words is jarring and the sentence structure sometimes becomes twisted and confusing. I think he's trying too hard.

Keep trying. You may eventually write the next erotic Great Gatsby. You'll never know if you don't try.