All Comments on 'Reality Break'

Oh the possibilities...

Do we get more?

Too simplistic. Not enough bondage or restraint.

Thanks Anon and Bearslady for leaving comments.

Bearslady, this is the only installment for this story. It was a quick one-off inspired by a comment a friend made. It was a difficult point of view to write from and I don't see myself attempting it again.

Anon, I completely agree that this is a fairly vanilla BDSM story. It's more of a testing out the waters for the characters involved than any attempt at something more involved or experienced. I was thinking what the first time might be like for inexperienced participants more than for someone who had been around the block a few times.

Thanks again!