by abiguy
Beck, your going to have a great summer - still think of Alan?
Please add a 4th to this. It's just great. It's one of the best stories I've read on this site and I've been on it for many years.
i really like this so far, ive been checking everyday for the 4th, when is it coming?
It's time to sit down and write this story and make it a complete chapter. So far not liking it at all.
The store needs more story, what you have is good but give more detail to give each character a personality instead of just a person having sex.