All Comments on 'Recluse'

by Teurastaja

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
No ending

He fucks her bear but no worries about putting on inside her

TeurastajaTeurastajaover 10 years agoAuthor
good point!

I did think about including words about protection in this story (and all my stories). Obviously that's something that's very important to remember in real life, but I was thinking of this as more of a fantasy than a real situation. In this fantasy world there are no STIs or unplanned pregnancies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story

Great story, thank you. I hope you can continueing and write part 2. Loving the story.

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

I hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beauty and the Beast?

Well, maybe. But this story is very different from a lot of the "stuff" on here. It may be a wild stab in the dark but I think you're a Writer. With a big W.

I liked to read your story and think there's room for at least another about these two lovers.

The only negative comment I have is not really aimed at you so much as all the others who do the same thing but way more than you have in this story.

Growled. He growled. I know it's probably animal lust, but please, don't do what others do. Please, try to find another verb.

Still got five stars, though. Thanks for writing it, Writer Woman.

meh4912meh4912over 10 years ago
5 stars

I thought it was a great story, well done, sexy and appealing.

Hope to see more.

horney47horney47over 10 years ago
Very touching

I'm a bit of a romantic so I really enjoyed this story. I hope you continue to write similar ones. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
extremely positive and sensitive

Well done you have elicited my first comment on any story! I have been reading Literotica for several years and I found your story very sensitive, well written, and erotic at the same time. Hope to read more from you soon????

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect!!!

I loved this - hope there is more!

yankeecatladyyankeecatladyover 10 years ago
Beautiful

A beautiful and fun story. Thanks.

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
Great Read*****

You blended everything in this story. Fine piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well done !!!

Very well thought out and told. Wonderful story !!

Ending a little abrupt, but very well done.

NorthCoastSmartNorthCoastSmartabout 10 years ago
One of the best

...sexy and sweet stories on the site. You can write, the story builds in interest, the characters have real emotions and the sex is, well, very hot and arousing. Thanks for posting this story.

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
ITS LIKE CLIMBING A TREE WHEN YOU WERE YOUNG AND SMALL

sometimes you just need a little boost, TK U MLJ LV NV

OleguyOleguyabout 10 years ago
I'm humbled.

I just read one of the best stories I have enjoyed for a helluva long time.

Top marks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

didn't think twice before i pressed 5 star button. great great ....

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Really well done. Heartfelt, sexy, erotic, and more. I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love me some Gabriel!

My heart fluttered throughout the entire story. I usually come on this site when I'm hot and bothered but this story was so enchanting to me I'll definitely read this again. Heartwarming and sexy , what more can you ask for?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Turn this into a book

This was unexpectedly delightful. Please, please flesh this out into a full book. You write exceedingly well and the characters were surprisingly developed. Love it!

MisshotlaramieMisshotlaramieover 7 years ago
Wonderful

I love this story!

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For almost as long as I can remember I've amused myself by creating elaborate fantasies. A few years ago I started writing them down. I hope you enjoy sharing them! I love getting feedback so please feel free to comment or e-mail me :)

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