by Teurastaja
This was unexpectedly delightful. Please, please flesh this out into a full book. You write exceedingly well and the characters were surprisingly developed. Love it!
My heart fluttered throughout the entire story. I usually come on this site when I'm hot and bothered but this story was so enchanting to me I'll definitely read this again. Heartwarming and sexy , what more can you ask for?
I just read one of the best stories I have enjoyed for a helluva long time.
Top marks.
sometimes you just need a little boost, TK U MLJ LV NV
...sexy and sweet stories on the site. You can write, the story builds in interest, the characters have real emotions and the sex is, well, very hot and arousing. Thanks for posting this story.
Very well thought out and told. Wonderful story !!
Ending a little abrupt, but very well done.
You blended everything in this story. Fine piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.
Well done you have elicited my first comment on any story! I have been reading Literotica for several years and I found your story very sensitive, well written, and erotic at the same time. Hope to read more from you soon????
I'm a bit of a romantic so I really enjoyed this story. I hope you continue to write similar ones. Thanks.
I thought it was a great story, well done, sexy and appealing.
Hope to see more.
Well, maybe. But this story is very different from a lot of the "stuff" on here. It may be a wild stab in the dark but I think you're a Writer. With a big W.
I liked to read your story and think there's room for at least another about these two lovers.
The only negative comment I have is not really aimed at you so much as all the others who do the same thing but way more than you have in this story.
Growled. He growled. I know it's probably animal lust, but please, don't do what others do. Please, try to find another verb.
Still got five stars, though. Thanks for writing it, Writer Woman.
Great story, thank you. I hope you can continueing and write part 2. Loving the story.
I did think about including words about protection in this story (and all my stories). Obviously that's something that's very important to remember in real life, but I was thinking of this as more of a fantasy than a real situation. In this fantasy world there are no STIs or unplanned pregnancies.