All Comments on 'Recollections'

Very confusing with the switch in first-person POV throughout. Pick one viewpoint and stick with it.

This is good erotica from a talented writer - two well-drawn characters, interesting in different ways, that we gradually get to know. I liked the switches in POV, very effective. Looking forward to the next chapters (?).

As one who is near the age of Alan - I am enjoying this wonderful story. I have to admit - I was surprised - and disappointed when it ended so abruptly. I will be looking forward to the following chaper(s)

Well written! Good development of characters, love the POV from them both. Cannot wait for subsequent chapters, please be sure to continue.

Sorry to say it, Sammi, but not one of your best at all, I'm afraid. A bit sloppy in parts. Your last one was great, though. Wanda.

Sorry to say it, Sammi, but not one of your best at all, I'm afraid. Rather sloppy in parts, and not a very believable storyline. Wanda.

No sammican't write, boring and disjointed

Interesting points of view Sammi and well written too... Keep up the good work.

A well written account of the beginning to an unlikely relationship. As unrealistic as it at first seems, there's a clear immediate connection between the two of you. Chemistry between two people can be such a wonderful thing, regardless of age or any other social conventions. Don't hold back...

I love how you've portrayed Alan and Sammi. Each of their internal dialogues seem so realistic, Alan an older gentleman and Sammi a young free spirit. I really got me fantasizing about getting with an Alan ;). Would love to have a sequel!