All Comments on 'Recollections Ch. 03'

those who have been fortunate enough to read these submissions are still in awe of the quality of your writing, or maybe you have been unfortunate enough to have picked up only the - on here for a single page fairly monosyllabic stroke and grunt tale - brigade who have been soundly intimidated into silence - whatever. Please don't stop writing. You have a real talent - which is why I guess you're studying film and video and developing what could be an excellent film script. Erotica appeals to all the senses (as I'm sure you appreciate) and the few good writers on here often seem to be ignored or receive poor comments. Believe in yourself and follow your dream. Thank you for sharing your talent.

I agree with the previous comment, and is there any chance of a quick fuck, too? :)

I'm afraid that I just can't buy this set-up. It's very difficult to work out who's talking at any time, and neither of the characters is really believable. Sorry. Wanda