All Comments on 'Red Mac'

You painted such a good picture of the two people fucking in the rain that it made me want to do the same. Too bad we are in the drought, ha ha. Thanks for a great short story.

That was a very well formulated and graphic expression of raw lust and sex. What can be better, besides the real thing. Snowing here, wonder if that would work??

A hot short piece erotica, with a strong narrator in full control of the sex action.

Delectable

Deliciously erotic. I experienced rain sex, but only once. You created a perfect scenario for repeat hookups. Loved every word of your story.