All Comments on 'Refined Adjustments Ch. 01'

Ok I can't see her weight not showing up on her frame .Because I am 5'2 and197 pounds and my weight shows on my frame. 40 dd 's I am not. So she seems a little overweight to me. Not that it is a bad thing

The story is CLEARLY tagged Black BBW ! I really like the start. Can't wait to read more.

I'm guessing this is going to be a Dom/Sub story. If not, the professor sure is showing signs of a dominant personality.

Confused about her weight. She can't be petite weighing over 200 lbs and it doesn't show with her small height.

Excited to find out what happens next.

This seems to be the making of a good story, I hope to read more soon.

Very charming story and I cant wait for more! Great Job! :D

Please tell me you're going to update? This is such a good start!!

But you do need to rework her weight MOST DEFINITELY. Petite women CANNOT be 230-lbs and have it not show. It would show at 180-lbs and it would show even at 150-lbs that you have weight that you need to lose.

Wow nice comments..aholes

petite vs. obese who gives a f***

How about the story

It's a good start and I can't wait for the update, but she could hide her weight my friend is 230 at 5'6 but you would never know looking at her because I guessed her weight at 135 I tell her that her head alone weighs 50 lbs.

Ok im about 300 pounds but im almost 6 feet tall and its does show but not really. im fat really doesnt matter. Get over ur self. Its a story

Ummm I would have been bright red if he would have been that close saying all those things, not to mention thoroughly drenched