All Comments on 'Remember the Summer'

by Jonathanx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A thing of art

A promosing,inteligent painting.

Joey BurdetteJoey Burdetteover 16 years ago
Outstanding!

Man, you have got to give us more stories. This was so fine--I mean it had style, as well as being very, very erotic. Such a rare thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Poor

Poorly written. I have no issue with the topic here, but the story itself lacks timeline, flow and a general understanding of continuity. I advice you to read up on better writters before trying to make another attempt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Poor...thing!

You obviously have never been exposed to REAL writing, only the crude dick-jerking type. This has real style. I'll look for more from this writer.

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