by china-doll
you go,doll, great story that kept me gushing with wetness.
luv,susie32
I like the way you think. Great characters & excellent story.
Excellent job on this one CD. I loved the whole story line and hell...what was that 800 number again?
keep it goin.
*kiss*
I loved this story - so much that I sent the link to a bi cyber-friend, and I'm afraid it will seduce her away from me. This kind of story makes me want to be a woman and a lesbian. I also wish for a male version of that device.
Fucking hot all of it. This could have gone on for a lot longer than these four pages just to help me add a few more orgasms to the three I have already had while reading this story.
I need one of those! The device, the remote, and the pussy licking!
an amzing story...if only they made those 4 men as well...still, kept me entertained 4 ages! frm alex southend england xxx
I am serious, if this is for real, email me, da_queer_chicky@hotmail.com if its not, you just wound me up so bad i think i might cry
damn that was hot
ps i think i saw those at walmart *wink wink*
no really excelent job author
I bought my lover a remote egg with seven speeds last week and we went shopping - I kept it low speed unti she went to pay the cashier then stayed just on the edge of the range of the remote - stepping backwards and forwards apace. She had tears in her eys and the cashier had to ask here if she was alright. Boy did she get her revenge later. Great story
I know I've read this story before, possibly more than once. No idea why I haven't left a review before now. My only complaint was it was too short... it left me wanting a lot more. Which, now that I think about it, is probably a good thing *lol*
Such an arousing story.
As a guy, it would be just so cool to have one of them for me!
There are so many things right about this story. The writing is great, the characters are just right, the story line doesn't progress too fast or too slow and the idea is mind blowing. I wish that were real!
Super story. Too bad it isn't real, I'd get one for the wife.
The bestest story I've read. Enjoyed every bit of it. Guess what! I finished with wet panties without even touching my self.
The story has a great concept. However, many times I was disturbed by the simple mistakes. Frequently the word "to" was mistaken for "too". Other issues were words containing two of the same letter. "Loosing" instead of "losing," for example. This happened a few times. Please take these suggestions into consideration; an edited version would be astounding. Keep up the good work.
This is my favourite story on here, it gets me everytime. The mistakes make it even better for me as you can tell where you've become lost in your own writing, the mistakes appear at the most erotic moments - that i don't think is a coincidence. Well done and keep going. :)
Hmmm As A LESBIAN I Never Believed That Sex Toy's
Were Necessary.
But You Seem To Have "Cum" Across An Idea That
Truly Sounds Very Sexciting Wonderdful.
Thank You For Such A Wonderful Story
Kisses
Other people had some complaints about the writing but I didn't mind that. What a great premise to the story. If there actually was device like that I'd get it implanted immediately! Can you imagine the fun you could have? More please!
...... hilarious ...... DAMN ...... what a ride! (smirk) never laughed so freely in a loooong tym. AWESOME...... just found my favorite author. well deserved 10* i am so totally impressed with this story ... it is HOT HOT (er, where can i get that remote?) LOL :-)
Can't relate to a flesh and blood man. They needed a machine. BARF!
I love the idea behind this story. It is well written and amusing as well as quite erotic. Keep up the excellent story telling
I would LOVE to have my wife Anne meet Suki with Suki at the control at all times.
I'll comment in about an hour, after I cum down from this cum-high.
Excellent story!
Didn't really know what to expect when I got into this but I'm certainly not complaining. The mini twist was fun and fairly expected, but I appriciate that you didn't answer every question the reader might have; like that you can assume Suki probably owns the bar or whatever.
Good work!
Suki admitting to the implant at the beginning ruined the story. What happened after was predictable.