All Comments on 'Remote Control'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hmm......delicious

you go,doll, great story that kept me gushing with wetness.

luv,susie32

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Creative & erotic

I like the way you think. Great characters & excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I WANT ONE TOO!

Excellent job on this one CD. I loved the whole story line and hell...what was that 800 number again?

keep it goin.

*kiss*

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I'm with her

I WANT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

smy3thsmy3thover 18 years ago
Great concept well written

I loved this story - so much that I sent the link to a bi cyber-friend, and I'm afraid it will seduce her away from me. This kind of story makes me want to be a woman and a lesbian. I also wish for a male version of that device.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
My god!

This is The best story i have ever read....i cant get over it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very nice

excellent, more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
fucking wow

Fucking hot all of it. This could have gone on for a lot longer than these four pages just to help me add a few more orgasms to the three I have already had while reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I need one!

I need one of those! The device, the remote, and the pussy licking!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
i neeed one now!

where can i get one???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
wow

an amzing story...if only they made those 4 men as well...still, kept me entertained 4 ages! frm alex southend england xxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
HOT!!!

Oh my GOD that was soooo hot... need one of those baaad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS FOR REAL

I am serious, if this is for real, email me, da_queer_chicky@hotmail.com if its not, you just wound me up so bad i think i might cry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Holy Fuck (literally xD)

damn that was hot

ps i think i saw those at walmart *wink wink*

no really excelent job author

Ripple68Ripple68almost 16 years ago
Fantastic

I bought my lover a remote egg with seven speeds last week and we went shopping - I kept it low speed unti she went to pay the cashier then stayed just on the edge of the range of the remote - stepping backwards and forwards apace. She had tears in her eys and the cashier had to ask here if she was alright. Boy did she get her revenge later. Great story

PoutineFanPoutineFanabout 15 years ago
I wish I could get one of those :)

I know I've read this story before, possibly more than once. No idea why I haven't left a review before now. My only complaint was it was too short... it left me wanting a lot more. Which, now that I think about it, is probably a good thing *lol*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
oh my

Such an arousing story.

As a guy, it would be just so cool to have one of them for me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Amazing!

There are so many things right about this story. The writing is great, the characters are just right, the story line doesn't progress too fast or too slow and the idea is mind blowing. I wish that were real!

knotz2uknotz2uover 14 years ago
Whew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Super story. Too bad it isn't real, I'd get one for the wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Simply great

The bestest story I've read. Enjoyed every bit of it. Guess what! I finished with wet panties without even touching my self.

zillerzillerabout 13 years ago
Good - Mistakes, however

The story has a great concept. However, many times I was disturbed by the simple mistakes. Frequently the word "to" was mistaken for "too". Other issues were words containing two of the same letter. "Loosing" instead of "losing," for example. This happened a few times. Please take these suggestions into consideration; an edited version would be astounding. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
amazing

This is my favourite story on here, it gets me everytime. The mistakes make it even better for me as you can tell where you've become lost in your own writing, the mistakes appear at the most erotic moments - that i don't think is a coincidence. Well done and keep going. :)

KathyFKathyFalmost 13 years ago
Very Sexciting

Hmmm As A LESBIAN I Never Believed That Sex Toy's

Were Necessary.

But You Seem To Have "Cum" Across An Idea That

Truly Sounds Very Sexciting Wonderdful.

Thank You For Such A Wonderful Story

Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great!

Other people had some complaints about the writing but I didn't mind that. What a great premise to the story. If there actually was device like that I'd get it implanted immediately! Can you imagine the fun you could have? More please!

NobleKorhedronNobleKorhedronabout 12 years ago
H-O-T!! A+++!

Seriously H-O-T! Any chance of a continuation?

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...... hilarious ...... DAMN ...... what a ride! (smirk) never laughed so freely in a loooong tym. AWESOME...... just found my favorite author. well deserved 10* i am so totally impressed with this story ... it is HOT HOT (er, where can i get that remote?) LOL :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yep - a real joke

Can't relate to a flesh and blood man. They needed a machine. BARF!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I loved this story

I love the idea behind this story. It is well written and amusing as well as quite erotic. Keep up the excellent story telling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Suki and Anne

I would LOVE to have my wife Anne meet Suki with Suki at the control at all times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Cum down

I'll comment in about an hour, after I cum down from this cum-high.

Excellent story!

mambrkemambrkeover 8 years ago
Hot

Hot ass hell.. part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot And creative

Didn't really know what to expect when I got into this but I'm certainly not complaining. The mini twist was fun and fairly expected, but I appriciate that you didn't answer every question the reader might have; like that you can assume Suki probably owns the bar or whatever.

Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Suki admitting to the implant at the beginning ruined the story. What happened after was predictable.

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