All Comments on 'Renata's Vacation'

Excellent. More detail with the whips please.

well written and very enjoyable..nice to see a bdsm story thats not "too" way out there but still intense and exciting along the wild side *smile*...Thank you for sharing and i look forward to reading on. I had started reading this one a long while back and had to go to work and lost track of it...so i was happy to find it again to renew my interest. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Not much else to say, but intense, nice story and - the best bit - believable!