by TripleL
I am not sure where this tale belongs (saying it belongs somewhere on this site).
It is a different take...
but not really possible. I lost interest when she gained control of the company after playing the stock market or whatever for a couple of years? Oh --- If only success was so easy! Anyway, gave yo a reasonable mark to encourage you, because at least you made the effort.
No characters of interest or likability. Nothing clever or original or sexy. One star only because there is no capability for zero stars.
was purely accidental. Badly written (the dialogue, in particular, was utterly crass) and there was absolutely zero eroticism.
Dude, I don't mind reading cheating whore stories as long as I get a heads up. I was hoping for something romantic.
I enjoyed it. How many of these other people commenting actually make a contribution to this site?
it should definitely be in the Loving Wives or Encounters section. You definitely wrote this with a thesaurus at your side -- perhaps a little too close. The cluelessness of the other characters is the only part that really doesn't work here.
Just makes you wonder, whatever happened to this sick fuck?
This author is an idiot! But guess what, all of the cuckolds just love this story. Lucky for the rest of us that the cuckolds make up less than 0.01% of the male population. Maybe they will all die off by the next generation!
A new contender for the worst LW story ever posted. This does not have even one redeeming factor. Scores are much too high.
More cuck shit. Same old Loving Wives. I still can't figure out why I come to this forum and read this crap.
Hot story, but a massive point reduction for the blatant fucking lie in the story's description. Draws you in thinking it's a wholesome story for once but it turns out to just be another cheating story