All Comments on 'Renewing Vows'

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MrVdogMrVdogabout 11 years ago
All she wanted

was a little understanding and a yard long cock... 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wild ride huh

I am not sure where this tale belongs (saying it belongs somewhere on this site).

It is a different take...

BriteaseBriteaseabout 11 years ago
Story ok

but not really possible. I lost interest when she gained control of the company after playing the stock market or whatever for a couple of years? Oh --- If only success was so easy! Anyway, gave yo a reasonable mark to encourage you, because at least you made the effort.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 11 years ago
Yuck! Nothing erotic or likable here

No characters of interest or likability. Nothing clever or original or sexy. One star only because there is no capability for zero stars.

ythebadgerythebadgerabout 11 years ago
Any relationship with reality

was purely accidental. Badly written (the dialogue, in particular, was utterly crass) and there was absolutely zero eroticism.

ValerionValerionabout 11 years ago
Romantic?

Dude, I don't mind reading cheating whore stories as long as I get a heads up. I was hoping for something romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
enjoyed it

I enjoyed it. How many of these other people commenting actually make a contribution to this site?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story, but

it should definitely be in the Loving Wives or Encounters section. You definitely wrote this with a thesaurus at your side -- perhaps a little too close. The cluelessness of the other characters is the only part that really doesn't work here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Fuck God... This is what we should be worshiping,"

Just makes you wonder, whatever happened to this sick fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What a load of shit!

This author is an idiot! But guess what, all of the cuckolds just love this story. Lucky for the rest of us that the cuckolds make up less than 0.01% of the male population. Maybe they will all die off by the next generation!

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
New contender

A new contender for the worst LW story ever posted. This does not have even one redeeming factor. Scores are much too high.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More cuck shit. Same old Loving Wives. I still can't figure out why I come to this forum and read this crap.

Indignato23Indignato236 months ago

Hot story, but a massive point reduction for the blatant fucking lie in the story's description. Draws you in thinking it's a wholesome story for once but it turns out to just be another cheating story

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