by Conan_T_Barbarian
Nice job. Not really my cup of tea, but well written. Keep up the good work.
I'm not into the BBW scene, at all, but this series of stories is very well written, enough so that it still made for entertaining reading. There are a few technical problems (punctuation, typos, etc), but the story line is excellent. I especially enjoyed the method of obtaining revenge; so appropriate.
--K
This story is a real treat for the erotic enthusiast. The steady introduction of different experiences and situations. The world is your oyster so please keep writing and pushing the envelope.
I have read all of your submissions and, apart from what someone else said about the "technical" difficulties, I have enjoyed every one of them.
More power to your writng elbow my friend.
A fabulous ending to a great story line. Looking forward to new writings.