All Comments on 'Repeat After Me'

You had me there, right up till the spit.....and then I threw up my hands and said "Fuck it"! I can't stand that crap so I won't be reading any more. A good story wasted by one single instance. Too bad.

Yeah you lost me there too. You had great detail but that was just weird.

I liked it Especially the spit.

It was brilliantly written, but the spit caught me a bit offguard. I liked it though

I loved it keep it coming. Spit and all.

She will soon be looking at spit like water. 8 glasses a day.

Yah that was pretty fucking weird. I hate stories like that, but I'll keep reading since well yah gotta admit it is a good tale, Continue but dude Spit is just too whadda fuck yass, whatever. Good job.

I love this story,

next installment very soon please

I love this. More soon, please. Please?

Lets get some more of this! Read the second chapter and loved it too! Here's hoping more are on the way.

Hopefully spit will become her drink of choice.