by RepeatAfterMe
Lets get some more of this! Read the second chapter and loved it too! Here's hoping more are on the way.
Yah that was pretty fucking weird. I hate stories like that, but I'll keep reading since well yah gotta admit it is a good tale, Continue but dude Spit is just too whadda fuck yass, whatever. Good job.
It was brilliantly written, but the spit caught me a bit offguard. I liked it though
Yeah you lost me there too. You had great detail but that was just weird.
You had me there, right up till the spit.....and then I threw up my hands and said "Fuck it"! I can't stand that crap so I won't be reading any more. A good story wasted by one single instance. Too bad.