All Comments on 'Reputation'

The first comment is unwarranted. There are a few errors, but none are egregious. The plot and the characters hold together well, which is uncommon in many of the longer stories here. The erotic component is well done as well.

This was a fun read. I liked the premise and characters. I had a smile the whole time I read it. My only negative comment is with the way Trelia talks. If she was a dedicated as you described, as well as being the fall's daughter, she would not be talking like a mill. Acting like one, sure. Talking like one, no. But this is a minor complaint. Great story overall though.

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So much better than the usual weird cuckold stuff on this stuff.

It's a lovely story.great work,I enjoyed it.

Jesus F. Christ, that was terrible. Badly written and a plot out of a bad dream.

great story and the build up plot was nice

Wow, was that awful or what? 6 pages and a convoluted plot that ended up nowhere. I skipped around and still read too much. 2*

never beats the heart, TK U MLJ LV NV

I love how the troll anons like to hate every story. I suspect it is the same needle dick every time.

The story was well thought and written in a precise and captivating manner. The only complain I have is that it lacked the much needed detail. If you could have made it into a 10 page story by adding just 4 pages of detail, it would have looked so much better! Nonetheless, GOOD JOB!

Ngl this made me cry a little when they confessed their love and everytime triela crore lol

Good story but the end was a little rushed..still worth 5 stars

Good story, love the plot twists