All Comments on 'Reputation'

Good story, love the plot twists

Good story but the end was a little rushed..still worth 5 stars

Ngl this made me cry a little when they confessed their love and everytime triela crore lol

The story was well thought and written in a precise and captivating manner. The only complain I have is that it lacked the much needed detail. If you could have made it into a 10 page story by adding just 4 pages of detail, it would have looked so much better! Nonetheless, GOOD JOB!

I love how the troll anons like to hate every story. I suspect it is the same needle dick every time.

never beats the heart, TK U MLJ LV NV

Wow, was that awful or what? 6 pages and a convoluted plot that ended up nowhere. I skipped around and still read too much. 2*

great story and the build up plot was nice

Jesus F. Christ, that was terrible. Badly written and a plot out of a bad dream.

It's a lovely story.great work,I enjoyed it.

So much better than the usual weird cuckold stuff on this stuff.

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This was a fun read. I liked the premise and characters. I had a smile the whole time I read it. My only negative comment is with the way Trelia talks. If she was a dedicated as you described, as well as being the fall's daughter, she would not be talking like a mill. Acting like one, sure. Talking like one, no. But this is a minor complaint. Great story overall though.

The first comment is unwarranted. There are a few errors, but none are egregious. The plot and the characters hold together well, which is uncommon in many of the longer stories here. The erotic component is well done as well.