All Comments on 'Resonance'

As my title says, it is an unusual story and well told!

Why don't you write more of this story? I think it has potential. Explore their relationship a little more, the possibilities. She gradually becomes aware of what he is doing, resents it, but cannot deny the pleasure she gets from their encounters. Does he love her? Does she love him? What happens?

I enjoyed, but want more.

I enjoyed your story greatly and hope you will take it to the next level. The thought of him in a room full of women eager to do his bidding is really hot. I am sure it would make a great sequel!

I like the way this story flows... I cant wait for the next addition.

it wasok, a little more detail though.

As a nerd I can understand the main character and loved the idea of how the device worked.

Great story!

It started out promising to be very erotic but ended as crude low-class crap

In the next chapter he gets that ass.

Keep the story going. He nails all the girls in her frat house.

it was written by a low level Jr. h/s kid, at best.