by Mistress Drusilla
Love all of your stories,
since I just found them,
but very intriguing and
can't wait for more from this one..
Keep us cumming back for more shall you?
Well some people obviously need more to get their imaginations into gear. The build-up was enough to get me going!! I want to see what happens next. :-)
Actually I quite like the build up. I am looking forward to seeing how things heat up in the next chapter.
Disagree with last comment. I prefer shorter postings than ploughing through never-ending stories on one long screen. Don't always have time to read long ones. Maybe some people have enough time on their hands but a lot of others don't.
Far, Far too short. Why not wait till you've written a decent amount and then post it. There seems to be a plague of these short chapter submissions on Lit.