All Comments on 'Retribution'

A few more chapters PLEASE!

I'm looking forward to him being forcefully feminised, and to enjoy the pleasures of wearing lingerie, skirts, dresses and blouses.

Turn him into a pretty little girl and then teach him how to please, women, men and anything else!

That was really good and I can't wait to see what will happen next

Excellent start...can hardly wait for the next chapter. Love the thought of him being feminized and physically transformed permanently.

would love to read more

what a good start to the story

hope you write more soon

story sucked.........no ending, real crap

In his predicament a man simply kicks the man's knee behind him and them crushes his larynx, killing him. He then gets dressed, figures out where he is and leaves. It wouldn't take him very long to figure out who was behind his kidnapping. Badly done, unfinished story.

VERY BAD STORY!

liked this 1st chapter of this story. Not sure it doesn't belong in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category...maybe the BDSM category... because the only clues we have to place it in TS/CD is the captor calls him a girl. Aside from that slight confusion, this is a nice intro to what I hope will be a good get-even TS/CD themed story.