All Comments on 'Retribution Ch. 02'

please...please...please continue...I love this story!!!

so hot, I love humiliation and forced feminization

oh my god such a hot story, i want to read more please keep writing , all the humiliation is such a turn on ,i wish they had kidnapped me , write more soon please .

A story of pain and humiliation of a male to feminise him..... and the author is a woman. Hon........ has someone done you worng?

Still the bastard deserves all that WILL be coming to him. The problem is that I know and you know that eventually he will come to like it too much.

I assume that needles are female hormones.... correct?

When will he get the surgery as he must be completely sterilised and gender reassigned ????????

I want to start out by saying from the introduction in chapter 1, that he was not interested in the bitch who is doing this to him. She was the one chasing him. He actually gave an honest assessment of her sexual talents, and she came up lacking.

So, who needs to learn a seductive walk, and how to give mind blowing oral sex? Her, not him! I get the feeling that he will make a far better shemale to have sex with, than she ever will. Sad.

This is amazing, please continue soon!

When his captor pulled on his leash, yank back. He's standing, you're on the floor and have the leverage. When he falls towards you, stab upwards into his balls, incapacitating him. Then choke him to death with the leash. All done. This was simply awful and add to that the fact that it was never finished and you have a complete piece of junk.

This series has a good enough storyline it is worth continuing. Unless, of course, you've decided is isn't. After all, you are the author. You took the time to imagine the scenes, work out the details, and put things together and make a story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Since the last story posted in 2011, I doubt we'll hear the end of this tale. Please be encouraged to continue to write stories of some kind. If not on Lit, then somewhere. You have some talent and you can grow it. Be well.

1 fave per <11000 views makes it nearly unanimous. 6 positive comments means one of you forgot to fave it. My 1 bomb dropped the score .02 means not a large number of votes.

Please finish this story.