All Comments on 'Return to the Light'

I even learned a new word, hehe. Your writing was outstanding as was your story telling. Keep writing, you have a gift. Bravo!

This story is so well written, you have to wonder if there is more to this story than meets the eye. When an author writes a story that makes you see the scene in your mind's eye, it leaves a strong impression of realism. I look forward to more stories from you.

Classy stuff. A lot of magazines would take it, though it might benefit from some cutting. As it is it's fine for literotica where people seem to ilke everything spelt out to the last grunt and shluck, but might be even more powerful if you left some things to the imagination, and suggested rather than stated. I believe in making readers work a bit :-)

This story was truly great. You write so very well and with a wisdom of a true "sage". I admire your style and really enjoyed your sensitive story telling. Thank you for knowing that people above 45 can be sexual and thank you for writing a really wonderful story.

Great sense of place, and personality. A little wordy in spots, but nonetheless delightful.

Can we have a part three?

Thank you.

You've told this tale very well indeed. Great character development. A beautiful story of rebirth and perhaps more. I especially liked the ending as it leads one to believe that there will be romance amongst the sexy senior citizens. Ronnie W.

A great little story, well told. Not a wasted word in it, no agonizing on and on, no belaboring simple issues. You were right to the point, and being so terse, didn't let anything get in the way of the beautiful meaning of it all. A very nice job. Thank you for sharing it with me.

Well done!

Two people meeting each others’ needs, drawn together after hesitation on each of their parts, and then assessing the situation realistically.

How nice to see that the future bodes well.