All Comments on 'Returning Home: Jodie Ch. 1'

This was a great story, building to a climax that was worth waiting for. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Glad I found you.

I really loved your story. I will be reading more

....that you elected not to continue this story. In the short amount of time, you did a good job building chemistry between Jodie & Danielle, was looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing what you have though, it was a good read.

I though this was very good story, it says ch 1 I do not see another one I hope there will be another one

how's about finishing this lovely tale. Looking forward to know what happens to these two, please