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who was reinvented by Jeff deserves much better than this!

Thank you for your comment Anonymous. I can assure you Jeff who, as you rightly point out, re-invented Beth Raines will return in Part Three. My object in Part Two is to show what Jeff accomplished. Beth is new, less inhibited, invigorated. She has confidence in herself as a woman, and the ability to control the power that accompanies such freedom. Here she chooses to enjoy that power. The erotic encounters, and all the sensations of her new allure. Beth grows as a sexual being thanks to the seeds planted by Jeff.

NB: To the generous readers of Part One, who suggested such things as bringing Jeff's tool belt into play, and other ideas. Stay tuned. Thank you all for reading and commenting.

Sorry for posting Part Two In a different Category to Part One. My error entirely. It just seemed to "fit" at the time"