All Comments on 'Revenge'

That's all this is.

Not because of content. Because of how boring and ridiculous it was

More like stupid wimp husband - did JPB give you any ideas on this type of storyline?

I'll give you a 25 for effort but it was all bad. Just what are you trying to get across as erotic? It is not erotic it is awful and portrayed so badly

Crap. Unadulterated crap.

Whatever you do, don't give up the day job.

Nice theme, writing seems hurried. I would of preffered more detail. It skipped parts that I really would of been interested in. Example you made meniotn at the end of story about the f/f, but hardly brushed that in story. That's why I gave it a 4.

I don't get people that come on here and criticize other people for their fantasies, or stories. It must take alot to spill your guts, let alone time to share and write these, and then to have some yahoo's come on and tear that up just isn't right.

Ignore them and enjoy what you enjoy. Thanks for sharing.

pure pleasure as you found out as you watched her enjoy. Unprotected sex with many strangers is a case of trying to get AIDS and STDs. I can agree with fucking her girlfriends but unprotected sex is stupid. Had I been in this story for real, I would have divorced her, and that video would have been on the web and in her parents, lovers wife, and employers hands. You can make a woman a slut, but you cant make a slut a woman, at least a woman with class, morals, and ethics.

You should kick the fucking bitch out of the house. No sex with you, but she's fucking another man. i don't see how you could ever fuck that bitch again.......

I hate bate and switch. you call this a revenge story?

Gang bang revenge, pffft. Would have been better if it was non-consent, but the wife was enjoying it! Not only that, but the only time she starts whimpering about her infidelities is when he shows her the tape at the end. The beans are spilled, may as well dump 'em. Simple confrontation could have covered that. Honestly this is the worst group sex story I have ever read.

This is a bad non-consent story, not LW

The wife seemed to enjoy every moment of the so-called revenge. I fail to find any retribution in this story.

<p>She's a stupid slut and he's just flat stupid. Just being in the same room with her after she's fucked that many strange men is asking to come down with something nasty, unplesant and maybe fatal. It seems like they're made for each other</p>

Only adults should write storys for this site. This was a waste.

get to the part where its over, her life is over as she knew it. and get a copy and information to larry's wife.

just end it.

With all the people that have been in there at least one of them has to be infected, just by odds. She isnt worth keeping. Give her and ultimatum, a divorce no money or equity to her or everyone gets a copy of the DVD. By the way DVDs dont rewind. Once you get the divorce, send out the DVDs anyway.

too lame to be taken seriously.

The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some serious mental illness mixed with some cuckold issues and some gay issues that were transferred to this ugly story.

This story lacks of creativity nonsense shallow low context poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

I would have to pick the whore to the curb after she was served papers!

you all get what you need and want, TK U MLJ LV NV

this wife and some man down the road will package hubby up and drop into a lake. This woman is not a good wife for anything...

Need's a chapter about what Mary and her does. Need's maybe a chapter of a disease? I mean this could go several different directions

You give a whore a gangbang. That's showing.her.

She is mentioned in the last few lines but nowhere else.

If you have a good looking slut, use them!

Blows me away all these delusional authors seem to think all black men have big long cocks. Was in the Military many years and in as latrines as the days I've been alive and believe me there are more blacks than white in many bases around the world. Point is I never saw one large cock on any one large Black man or small Black man for that matter!

This was just plain stupid.

Pathetic cuck story