All Comments on 'Revenge'

by New_Guy_Az

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lizzybit26lizzybit26almost 16 years ago
Hot!

Very Hot!

Looking forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Finish it!

I'm so intrigued! I hope you finish the story!

CaseybearCaseybearover 13 years ago
finish?

please finish the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Maths not a strong point!

If she is 18 and was 15 at the time of the 'grope' then how come she hasn't seen him in almost 5 years?

shexdensmoreshexdensmorealmost 9 years ago
Nice!

Well done, I'd elaborate on how it felt when he exploded inside her and continued with some anal raping. But that's me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I think it was very well written. I would love to know what would happen next though.

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 7 years ago
Why don't you finish the damn story?

Good so far...

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999over 6 years ago
Unfinished Symphony?

What happened afterward? A good beginning, but follow up is necessary.

beanburner69beanburner69almost 6 years ago
what ??

what happened ??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Perfect

25 to life in prison!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
where's the...

rest of the story? What a rip!

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Awful

Everything in the story is fucked up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What happened?

Finnish it

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