I enjoyed your story. However, while one should vary the use of adjectives and the names of the sex organs used in a story, there is, sometimes, just too much of a good thing….
I love feedback and emails. At least one of the stories I've written has been from someone contacting me and asking for a particular scenario. I really enjoyed that and wouldn't mind another shot. Thank you to all the people who have added me as a favorite author. It fills m...