by AaronAardvark
Well done!
It was a pleasure to read such a wry, whimsically detailed and comprehensive exposition of the ardent and impassioned episode that rewarded his act of good neighbourliness.
First-class vocabulary, grammar and punctuation albeit with the occasional slip.
Your writing style reflects your roots in natural English that entertains - a good addition to the quiver full of fine literary arrows you have hoisted over your shoulder here on this site.
Well paced and enjoyable
Look forward to a sequel, these characters are likeable
Well done
Now we have a new source of mature stories. We did'nt know you, yet.
And thanks to nepomuk, too. We have been a little astonished to have to look up so many expressions. Not being native speakers we are used to have to look up some, but not so many as necessary in this stor.y.
Please keep on posting.