All Comments on 'Ringing Sarah's Bell'

by AaronAardvark

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nepomuk77nepomuk77about 9 years ago
An Intense Interlude

Well done!

It was a pleasure to read such a wry, whimsically detailed and comprehensive exposition of the ardent and impassioned episode that rewarded his act of good neighbourliness.

First-class vocabulary, grammar and punctuation albeit with the occasional slip.

Your writing style reflects your roots in natural English that entertains - a good addition to the quiver full of fine literary arrows you have hoisted over your shoulder here on this site.

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimabout 9 years ago
Great read

Well paced and enjoyable

Look forward to a sequel, these characters are likeable

Well done

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
HOT Read****

Thanks for sharing.

mojorisin1967mojorisin1967about 9 years ago
Thanks from us, too.

Now we have a new source of mature stories. We did'nt know you, yet.

And thanks to nepomuk, too. We have been a little astonished to have to look up so many expressions. Not being native speakers we are used to have to look up some, but not so many as necessary in this stor.y.

Please keep on posting.

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