by Crouching_Buddha
Your story has been captivating and I am enjoying the little touches you have included dealing with the problems and joys of a winged being. Your universe here is vast and I know your story can go many different directions with the characters you have introduced so far, not to mention the dark mystery surrounding the two main characters. Keep up the great work and thank you.
raw731@hotmail.com
I think you have done a great job so far, both with the characters and the events that have transpired so far, and I'm excited to see what happens next.