All Comments on 'Rita's Cafe'

I like the story, but it was too long and not to the point. You seem to get off the driven path too much.

Sorry, Xamphos, some readers just can't stand a little pathos with their sex, or, perhaps, he/she doesn't have the age and/or experience to understand it.

Enjoyed it, there was a ring of truth. Please write more, thanks.

I enjoyed this, glad I found it. This the reason I love the archives of LW.