All Comments on 'Rite of Passage'

Looking forward to the next installment !!

Keep the story going. This was a great first chapter. Don't keep us waiting long.

please could rite more and make this is a series becasue it was soooo great

Good God, I haven't been worked up to a state like this in donno how long and then the author runs away. Go figure. Excuse me - I think I have to go kill some male somewhere. Or fuck him and then kill him. Or the other way round. Depends if I can catch him, of course. They're so fucking fast...

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